This is the second draft of my article page. I have since changed the main heading of this article to below the pictures as I feel the images are very dominant and should be primary focus of this article. I have included two thick lines to separate the images, the heading and the main article text. This is so that not everything get's mixed up as one big thing. I have included 'Do You Know Us?' in a highlighted blue as this is a play on of words in relation to their song 'Do You Know Me?' which is mentioned in the article. I have also included their logo style at the end of the article for some familiarity of existing fans. I have changed the blue box to a black box as I felt that this fitted the rock theme better. I have included upcoming tour dates and another sub-image to provide the article with a more complex feel.
it would be great to mention what the difference is between your drafts. The more improvements you make the differences will be more subtle and you will need to point them out.
ReplyDeleteIf you could also explain why you have made those changes that would be great.
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