For my second draft of my billboard I have changed the the strap line slightly to highlight the word you to provide an even greater chance of the reader feeling involved.
Overall, please comment on the changes that have been made and why. It is not always easy to see what has been amended and a brief explanation would help.
Overall, please comment on the changes that have been made and why. It is not always easy to see what has been amended and a brief explanation would help.
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